For my visual sequential narrative I decided to share the process of recreating an iconic photo. I got this idea by reminiscing during quartine about my adventures and came across hundreds of photos of me twirling. Then I decided to combine some of those photos to share my process and added Julie Andrews to hint at the Sound of Music.
This is an awesome and whimsical image! I love the literal representation of a sequence with the dancing lady. The shadows you've added are very well done, too. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI think you've done a really good job with this image. Dorothy's description of it being whimsical is very fitting and overall it's just a fun happy image to look at!
ReplyDeleteThis image is really fun! It looks like a photo someone took, I'm not sure if you want to go down this route but I feel like all your past stuff is colorful so it would be cool to add some cool colors, like pastels or something different maybe?
ReplyDeleteI really like your idea for this project! I would say you could go a little further with editing some of the background to match the fun and free feeling of the rest of the image. But overall, It's really greats so far!
ReplyDeleteI think the use of an iconic like that is creative and interesting. I feel like there is some larger narrative quality missing from the image, but that could just be me.
ReplyDeleteYou did a really good job of making all of the elements of this image blend together- the music notes add a really nice touch. Maybe try emphasizing one feature to create a central point of focus. Looks great!
ReplyDeleteThis is an interesting idea of using elements of you twirling to make a visual narrative. I feel as if you do not need the image for emphasis. I would try to create a focal point to emphasize a certain part of your narrative.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy this. It is playful and uplifting and nostalgic all at the same time. I agree with Jessica because its hard to focus on just one thing in this. Maybe just emphasize one singular cutout either you or the sound of music lady.
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ReplyDeleteI think this is a really cool idea! I think you could mess with the main picture that’s from the movie and make it look even cooler with colors and movement!